POrtfOlio Stuff. Critiques are HIGHLY appreciated;)

[russianspy437]

Well this is the most recent stuff decided I should post it up her for some helpfull criticism, so let me have it. I going to try to update the life drawing with some new ones. All of these are also on my blog, http://russianspy437.blogspot.com/ Thanks!


EDIT: SO I was not able to put them up as pictures, instead I went with a direct link, but they are still all on the blog, which I think would be easiest to view. Sorry for the inconveniance.

1)http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtqH6NST9I/AAAAAAAAALw/f7GkZbQmPD4/s1600-h/IMG_0178.jpg

2) http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtqIMfeIJI/AAAAAAAAAL4/EbvyM0szs9w/s1600-h/IMG_0179.jpg

3) http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtqIfKjtII/AAAAAAAAAMA/cx1sj-XbPz4/s1600-h/IMG_0180.jpg

4) http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtqIiNA-KI/AAAAAAAAAMI/C8TXWUr0TV0/s1600-h/IMG_0181.jpg

5) http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtqI-t99_I/AAAAAAAAAMQ/iJELxQLru5k/s1600-h/IMG_0182.jpg

6) http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtq0OJbogI/AAAAAAAAAMY/9mTWkkVdYfw/s1600-h/IMG_0183.jpg

7) http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtq0yBEPnI/AAAAAAAAAMg/DYRzJ_QjsWw/s1600-h/IMG_0184.jpg

8)http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtq1BL_5EI/AAAAAAAAAMo/nZR6JEuFjbo/s1600-h/IMG_0185.jpg

9)http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtq1SVL_cI/AAAAAAAAAMw/XlXRktQUiz8/s1600-h/IMG_0186.jpg

10)http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtq11hxc1I/AAAAAAAAAM4/JhyV6n_3K7A/s1600-h/IMG_0187.jpg

11)http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtt9C1WNBI/AAAAAAAAANA/Km0d8IpaIHs/s1600-h/IMG_0188.jpg

12)http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtt9dS2k5I/AAAAAAAAANQ/4XGB5y9PU_Q/s1600-h/IMG_0190.jpg

13)http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtt9vVAI9I/AAAAAAAAANY/RB3Lk3kvCsw/s1600-h/IMG_0192.jpg

14)http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRtt9vVAI9I/AAAAAAAAANY/RB3Lk3kvCsw/s1600-h/IMG_0192.jpg

15)http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRzw04dwF_I/AAAAAAAAANo/PoFcHSxzeR8/s1600-h/panel6+copy.jpg

16)http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRzw1JIOtbI/AAAAAAAAANw/jnKoho-dVZ4/s1600-h/panel+2+copy.jpg

17)http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRzw1baKlsI/AAAAAAAAAN4/9hKnt2u0vtM/s1600-h/panel5+copy.jpg

18)http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRzw1pA14kI/AAAAAAAAAOA/CLKZpWZLU3E/s1600-h/panel4+copy.jpg

19)http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRzw1qIy-nI/AAAAAAAAAOI/HnUfpEWzy3c/s1600-h/panel3+copy.jpg

20)http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_-SIeLTGDrcY/SRzxEC_qsWI/AAAAAAAAAOQ/tw0mMKoSdlE/s1600-h/panel1+copy.jpg

[neasg18]

i really like the way you draw the legs.
especially when they have knee high socks.
i think you might want to add in a few longer and more detailed figure drawings.

[KyleBaeta-Orick]

WOW! This stuff is very good! Especially your marker!

One thing to keep in mind is that you do sometimes and don't other times is to ground your figure. A shadow or a horizon line or something that plants your figure on the ground. Another thing (I need to work on this too) would be to start thinking about compositions while you're drawing.

I'd say all these are good for your portfolio, I'd keep the sketchbook stuff to the supplementary part of it though. Just because it doesn't look quite as finished.

[russianspy437]

thanks. yeah the panels of collaged pages are sketchbook excerpts. I can see what you mean about grounding the figure ill work on that. thanks. An here is some new stuff, I was tryin outsomethin different.

[AmourFonce]

Black paper and pastel?
How cal artsy of you.


anywho, I like these lots. 1 and 3 dont read too great though.
Try to look at these fast and see if you can honestly tell what's going on in a short amount of time.
If you can't, don't put it in. Ask for other's opinons too. Non-artists.

[russianspy437]

Thanks a bunch, I see exactly what you mean.

Here is some of the newest stuff:
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I definately want to keep the last three they are my favorites, the others are ... ehh. Anyways comments? critiques? rant?

thanks