Black paper and pastel?
How cal artsy of you.
anywho, I like these lots. 1 and 3 dont read too great though.
Try to look at these fast and see if you can honestly tell what's going on in a short amount of time.
If you can't, don't put it in. Ask for other's opinons too. Non-artists.
I WAS kit, but Animated Buzz doesn't love me anymore nd it's not letting me log on. T^T