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• DJ Crumrine

  

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  November 13, 2011 10:22:57 PM PST

  Your use of line and color is inspiring. I love it! I've been trying to use more color in my figure drawings but I always just end up just using it for the line work. The shapes are really cool and makes me want to explore more in different media.
• DJ Crumrine

  

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  December 8, 2011 10:47:48 AM PST

  The last watercolor is beautiful, also those pen and ink drawings are fantastic. The conte/pastel drawings in the beginning are good but the lines seem a little conflicting and/or not as strong as the ink and watercolor drawings. The drawing on the green paper is crazy cool and very inventive!
• DJ Crumrine

  

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  December 17, 2011 9:33:20 PM PST

  Ok, I'm getting kinda jealous of some of your use of color. That first one was very awesome. The second one looked like you were trying it out in different ways. It's a solid drawing but the color applied does not push it to the same level as the first.
  
  I hope I'm not creeping you out being the only one responding to you.
• James Hoe

  

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  December 29, 2011 7:51:05 PM PST

  Crystal Perea said:
  Oh okay, yeah I'm trying to debate which of those to include because I want to show I can do the one and two minute gestures. Also, thanks. Well, here's a brief update: http://crystalperea.blogspot.com/2011/12/brief-update.html I need to retake the pictures, not from my iphone, and I have more to add, but haven't had the time to borrow a camera. If anyone has input, suggestions, critique, anything... have at it. Thanks.

  proportions are a bit off on the first one and I'm not sure if the color in it is working for you. Since everything else is in black and white, the shape of the color is the first thing I see and it feels incomplete. Maybe if there was some other color in the drawing to balance it out, but as of right now it feels unfinished