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Two Dozen Drawings + Two Walk Cycles

    • 19 posts
    January 3, 2012 4:01 AM PST

    Hi forum,

    Back for more help!

     

    A lot of them still depend heavily on silhouette but it's getting way better compared to last summer

    Could someone point out which ones they like best so I can work to develop the style?

    Any critical issues other than small hands and feet?

    I still need to draw A LOT more to find my style but it always helps to hear other people's comments

     

    I had to type the URL:

    http://www.flickr.com/photos/64126390@N06/sets/72157628696721275

     

     

    and the animation:

    http://vimeo.com/34503569

     

    i have no knowledge of how one normally critiques animation, I guess I'm supposed to receive critique for the movement? any suggestions for when making the actual demo reel? I've used Toon Boom and it's so difficult, I don't know if that's what everyone uses...

     


    This post was edited by Mark Kwak at January 3, 2012 4:33 AM PST
    • 19 posts
    January 3, 2012 4:05 AM PST
    The video is edited because I'm sending it to CSSSA, and it should be self explanatory since I wrote everything in the video.
    • 22 posts
    March 13, 2012 10:21 PM PDT
    Wow, these are insane, are you kidding me?
    • 19 posts
    March 15, 2012 8:09 AM PDT
    :) thanks
    • 1 posts
    March 20, 2012 5:29 AM PDT

    for cheap animation software check out Digicel.com


    This post was edited by Kevin McLeod at March 20, 2012 5:29 AM PDT