August 31, 2011 8:43 AM PDT
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Art Critique
Nice stuff! I actually really enjoy your rough drawings the most. I'd like to see more of that instead of the refined stuff. Maybe some more gestural work. I'm also not seeing any action lines or construction, it seems like you're focusing too much on the contour line then on what makes up those lines. I do like your line work, but it might be something to consider and may even get more movement ad weight into your drawings. Good luck, looking good so far!